WaloWilly
Hello guys, here WaloWilly, I introduce myself. I am a new aspiring writer and just calling me that makes me a little uncomfortable, so any comments you make can be done gently, please. I let them see
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Me gusta le da al mundo un poco de realismo y abre una amplia gama de situaciones y emociones que pueden tener sus mujeres aparte de un cambio de ritmo en tus fics habituales. Sería interesante ver cómo se desarrollaría esta situación en tus otros fics como my stepsister
I'm not one to leave reviews, but hey, if it's the author's request, I should at least try. The plot is going well in general, I like the interaction of the characters, they seem faithful to their personality without seeming forced but I want more of the high school, it is where there is the most drama and also if possible some chapter from the point of view of another character I think that would be all on my part except for the obvious that it is a great fanfic and that honestly it should be higher in the ranking. Greetings ;)
Wing como interés amoroso? Yo pensé que talvez felicia o Jean. Para un buen drama de escuela diría que metas a liz Allen como hicieron en el espectacular hombre araña El desarrollo sigue siendo bueno, me hubiera gustado ver un poco la interacción de Colleen y Peter mientras entrenaban pero aún un muy buen capitulo espero el siguiente
Muy buen capitulo, espero realmente el reencuentro con Gwen y MJ pero cual seria el interés amoroso? o sería sin interés amoroso? O tal vez como en los cómics y sería sin ninguna relación sería pero con muchos casi algo? También la confrontación entre la identidad secreta de peter y la mujer araña Te dejo mi piedra, estoy esperando el siguiente capitulo 👍👏👏
The history is great, the characters are great just great 👍 👌 😀 Ntr... isn't cool but the face slaps are cool I'm sincerely hoping that in the next volume Alice will regret it
Is there any other page to read this novel? I can't translate it from the app and the chapters are locked
author please upload it on another platform, now it asks me to download the app to read the story and in the app I cannot translate the content. I am from Argentina and although I do speak English I have difficulties translating all the text and sometimes there are parts that I do not understand Please upload the story on scribblehub, or public novel
first of all, great chapter, I like the different points of view of people. second, can we see an episode that totally focuses on hector as a normal high school boy and his interaction with his peers? please 🥺🥺 third good job take a power stone, I'm looking forward to the next chapter