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I just can’t read this the grammer is just so bad lmao. The way nami just goes for everything off the bat just makes it seem like she’ s easy and I feel like all the characters are dumb

20 year old falling in love with an 14 year old is crazy no matter how I look at it😭

Almost busted a tear😭🔥 hope the author keeps going …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

It’s a pretty good story by an author that was just having fun and not a serious one I just didn’t like that madara didn’t like the mc and other characters off the bat. I’m not saying befriend them cuz like madara said “befriending everyone is not always a good thing and most times it’s a weakness” or sum bullshit like that😭 some of the stuff he would say threw me off as-well shit was just hella cringe and just stuff I would never expect madara to say… all in all I think this shii is readable there’s a lot worse things out there

I don’t see a lot of handsome mcs like you said and I’ve been through a lot of novels

The story was ok to me, I think the Mc was brain dead in some parts of the first 80+ chapters of the story so far, but I’ve seen a lot worse honestly, he doesn't use the system the way I would think he would, I thought he would buy all the op Jutsu an stuff after killing Madara (he gets 800 mill points off of killing Madara) then goes savage mode on Hashirama and the leaf killing everyone to get points which he would use to get stronger with his system unlocking more features an stuff like that

Would’ve been fun if the mc was adopted by the sect master instead of her being pregnant out of nowhere like a lot of other novels

So is the mic of the story the senior or the little girl I’m confused