The Shinobi With The Straw Hat

Author here This is a shameless review of myself. As some of you may have noticed, I am not a native English speaker. I will do my best to enrich my vocabulary. My story development is going pretty well from what I see, a lot of you seem to enjoy it. The character design could sometimes be better but I will give myself five stars haha. I try to post new chapters everyday, sometimes I will post one, two or maybe three. It will happen that I don't post on some days:( As for the world background, I think that im doing a pretty nice job portraying the warring states period, what do you guys think? Anyways, I hope that you guys stick with me to follow the adventures of Kentaro. Peace:)

one of the best novels, although at the beginning the development of the MC is a bit inconsistent in the future everything fits, you only have to endure 47 chapters of little development of the MC, the only thing I can point out is that the development came very late and surely due to this the novel lost readers.

At first the story does not convince me, but the more it progressed it got better, if you don't like the story at the beginning I recommend you not to leave it since it gets more interesting while you continue reading, congratulations to the author and I hope you do not leave this story . PD: sorry if it is not understood, this was translated by google.[img=update]

Let's Rank this Fanfic writing quality: 2 Stars. story development: 1 Star Character Design: 5 Stars Update Stability: 4 Stars World background: 5 Stars This fanfic contains only Cowardly and weak MCs who don't want to OP from the start with the help of System but don't have the will to be strong (weaktostrong of you don't know what i mean). MCs are only people who dare to bully the weak and are afraid of the strong. For example: MC bravely slaughtered bandits, but when he met a member of the Kaguya clan, the MC ran away. In My Opinion i Rated this Fanfic 3.4 Stars

This is just terrible...addive tho but terrible. The MC just going with the flow and making stupid decisions He seriously needs to get his emotions checked cause he can kill tree random kids and just move on but one kid dies in front of him and it's the end of the world. He is annoyingly attached to even the smallest of relationships and it's annoying

only one 5 star which is the world background since its a fanfic, anyways there is 0 i repeat 0! character development WHOLE STORY, be it chapter 1 to chapter 90+ his naivety NEVER CHANGES. He's like a retard who transmigrated to naruto.

overall its not bad but there are some points in the story that may or may not make you cringe but it really depends on who you are, the author seems cool though 😎

I am extremely surprised as to why the rating of this story is so high because I am in chapter 15 and MC has multiple personality disorder and the story is going haywire.... he is fearing a weak lord, fleeing from the fight, having self-doubt after a hundred of people, etc...

Only read if you’re interested in a very Very stupid mc who thinks everything should just go his way and if you’re interested in a story where canon pretty much won’t exist at all , author does have some talent for writing though so some people are bound to like the writing

my opinion on this 1) story is very fast-paced 2)it needs more detailed writing 3) needs more character (mc) development

1. MC is really stupid and has very little character development. 2.The MC's personality keeps changing.(multiple personalities). 3.The fights and the story's development seem very forced. 4.The MC is very reliant on the system.

At the beginning the mc and atory was a bit inconsistent but as the story progresses there is huge improvement in character development, background. All in all a good fanfic , still a lot better than the once we have going now. And the most important thing is Author is consistent with the update that's a big plus.

chaps up to 50 should be edited, most personality makes 0 sense and is kind of annoying, its very inconsistent up until 50 or so, its annoying that mc is a normal guy who has never used a sword before is able to just use one and beat a guy who's been training with swords since he was like 5, especially the "I decapitate ___ in a single strike, his body falls lifelessly on the floor" BS, especially since mc shouldn't know how to even sheath a sword (much harder than expected), I can't stress this enough, he has never used a sword and does all of this stuff flawlessly, its supposed to be a realistic ish sword fighting webnovel with some chakra in there. if its the main thing of the novel do it right

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You need to read this CUZ it's good. ....................................................................................................................

not interesting at all , not attachment to mc as a reader , nothing like a ninja , few chapters after mc fought madara uchiha , but find himself in trouble every time . . . world becoming unknown somehow , unknown clan , unknown people. not interesting at all . . no character attention expect MC . MC has no character to himself , no goals . no directions. meaningless or none POV . no awesome moments.

feels like the author has to many ideas so the character development becomes basically nonexistent due to how many ideas he's shoving in the fanfic Story by itself is pretty good just don't expect much intelligence do to the chaos of the whole thing

The pacing of the story is good, the arcs are neither to fast or to slow it is very enjoyable to read. the author must be a god I swear every time I check in there is another update the guy must be part robot. good story 10/10 👌👍

I don't usually comment but this is such a bad fanfic I wasted my time because comments said that it will become good after 50 chaps. But this just keeps getting worse. Don't waste your time on this 😔

Everything is good but the mc is just f****ng stupid.