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AzureAsura

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Fan of HP, reincarnation, game world, and global transmigration ^_^ buymeacoffee.com/azureasura

2022-03-21 JointGlobal
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura4mth
    Commenté

    please, more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

    Ch 5 First Day At Class
    HP: The Sun (reborn as luna's twin brother)
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura4mth
    Commenté

    Awesome!!! Waiting for more

    Ch 3 Coup D'état At The Pet Store
    HP: The Sun (reborn as luna's twin brother)
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura4mth
    Commenté

    How about we change the MC to Ib? At least give some special chapters featuring Ib's adventures.

    Ch 2 A Companion and getting a wand
    HP: The Sun (reborn as luna's twin brother)
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura4mth
    Commenté

    Good start. Wish you success

    Ch 1 Waking up
    HP: The Sun (reborn as luna's twin brother)
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura5mth
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    MC should screw this pig when time is right and if possible then kill him. I hate protagonists who think they can take anything they want for uncertain future. They are too hateful.

    Ch 64 Chapter 64: Soul Iron Ore Vein
    My Master Only Breaks Through on the Edge of Death
    Oriental · Pork 200 Pounds
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura5mth
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    SURPRISE!!!!!!!!! 🤬

    Ilona on the train was, in fact, Rosier under the effect of the Polyjuice Potion.
    Becoming Grindelwald's Descendant and The Next Dark Lord
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura5mth
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    Is this sh*tty MC gonna be the next Dark Lord? Have some demeanor, you s*cker!

    "Hello, senior! I'm a freshman at Hogwarts; you can call me Wentworth! It's a pleasure to meet you, senior. Are all the seniors at Hogwarts so dignified and impressive? I feel... It's quite stressful!"
    Becoming Grindelwald's Descendant and The Next Dark Lord
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura5mth
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    Dear author, I took back all my previous comments, this was just translation. Keep up the good work![img=recommend]

    Ch 8 Chapter 8 "Wand"
    Becoming Grindelwald's Descendant and The Next Dark Lord
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura5mth
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    Seriously?! 'Thank you'? If the plot wasn't promising, I would have dropped this at this exact moment.

    "Right hand, thank you!" Wentworth replied.
    Becoming Grindelwald's Descendant and The Next Dark Lord
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura5mth
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    Just telling your name? It's fine if you wanna create cliff-hanger, but this is too crude. Not telling the family name is unacceptable in any culture I guess. (I'm talking about Cassandra). Don't force things.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 "Miss Cassandra"
    Becoming Grindelwald's Descendant and The Next Dark Lord
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à Hanni_Baal

    Hanni_Baal, I got your point. I also don't like some fanon things, like making Dumbledore an evil mastermind or making Voldemort a stupid psycho, but what can we do? Just drop a novel if it has something you don't like.Even canon itself has some illogical things, and not everything is explained.

    "What you are holding in your hand is the syllabus with objectives I want you to fulfill with each lesson. I will do my part to its fullest. If you did your homework properly and every student achieves the result I want, I will teach you Occlumency in the remaining time of class. Now, let us start with today's objective, the Shield Charm."
    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à bob685014

    not sure yet

    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à scyfly

    you mean every paragraph should have quotation marks

    Ch 1 Job interview
    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à scyfly

    actually it's not translation, English is my second language and I plan to drift away from Gary Stu style, any advice on that

    Ch 2 Preparation
    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à scyfly

    I read too many Chinese translated works, now they are showing up 😞 Any advice to get rid of them?And, the novel is really written by eastern person, if you have any prejudice, you don't really have to near it, just don't read; don't take it as an offense

    A family of three can be seen eating breakfast in the dining room. The sun shines through the open window, creating a cozy and warm atmosphere in the room. This seemingly normal atmosphere didn't last long, as hooting broke the silence. A large grey owl with a letter attached to its leg appeared on their windowsill.
    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à scyfly

    I looked it up,the word 'entity' can be used in this context

    "No news is good news," interrupted Stille. "This is one of the most difficult projects as it involves magic and muggles—two entities incompatible with each other. As long as bad effects don't show up, you can continue. This will be one of the most groundbreaking works."
    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à WaitWhoWhat

    I just wanted to try to make the purebloods seem more noble, and I guess I screwed up

    "This one is honoured to receive personal guidance from you, Professor Elding." Stille nodded at him but didn't say anything.
    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à BookDragonling

    I didn't get your point, but you are right😁

    "This one is honoured to receive personal guidance from you, Professor Elding." Stille nodded at him but didn't say anything.
    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à Orion_Ridge

    1 fml

    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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  • AzureAsura
    AzureAsura6mth
    Répondu à Zyes1

    He was not a regular member, just honorary

    The Dark Force Defence League"
    Legend of Arcane Emperor
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