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Caimiz_Mudau

Caimiz_Mudau

Lv14
2022-03-17 JointGlobal
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  • Caimiz_Mudau
    Caimiz_Mudau4mth
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    ah Ms Han... she is the type to keep making things difficult until she gets her way.

    Ch 13 13. She was kissed senseless by him.
    Dear Mr. Shi
    Urbain · Purple-Red Beauty
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  • Caimiz_Mudau
    Caimiz_Mudau6mth
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    "That's because our Yaoyao has a good master like you"

    Seeing that Mr. Shan had dispelled her doubts, Pei's smile deepened, "That's because we Yaoyao have a good husband like you."
    HEAVENLY DIVINE DOCTOR: ABANDONED CONCUBINE
    Histoire · Seth_97
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  • Caimiz_Mudau
    Caimiz_Mudau6mth
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    why substitute master with husband? it's confusing

    Lu Shiming knew that her daughter had been studying with her husband recently, "Well come back, I happen to have something to discuss with your older brother."
    HEAVENLY DIVINE DOCTOR: ABANDONED CONCUBINE
    Histoire · Seth_97
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  • Caimiz_Mudau
    Caimiz_Mudau6mth
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    I like the plot very much so it pains me to say that the grammar needs a lot of work. Its sad cause I am reading this because I loved the the authors other stories. I also know that this may have been a direct translation issue. I wish it was better edited. Important to note are the gender flexible characters, overly repeated words and direct translation of Proverbs that lose meaning. Finally statements that place adjectives incorrectly. Just a few changes to this will make a difference to the great story. I hope to see even more of the authors work. Thank you for sharing your writing.

    HEAVENLY DIVINE DOCTOR: ABANDONED CONCUBINE
    Histoire · Seth_97
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  • Caimiz_Mudau
    Caimiz_Mudau1yr
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    I this avaliable in English. I like the art style and think it looks like a great read. just can read what they are saying. if there is an English translation please help me with the name so I can read it.

    Selir tersayang
    · YUNDUAN COMICS
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  • Caimiz_Mudau
    Caimiz_Mudau1yr
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    I love it please let it pass I have been praying 🙏 so much. The characters are all well written even the story keeps one wanting more. Keep up the good work

    After Transmigrating, The Fat Wife Made A Comeback!
    Urbain · Mountain Springs
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  • Caimiz_Mudau
    Caimiz_Mudau1yr
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    this I'd a gender salad, please I like the story go back and edit this. great writers learn from mistakes and aim to improve their work. we want to see this world through your eyes. keep writing. [img=recommend]

    Ch 1 Rebirth of daughter
    The Agent Concubine Is Not To Be Trifled
    Histoire · Luo Yi Yi
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