Tsniper

makes me feel like I'm reading a script for a play

Good story thus far. It has potential to be a hit, Grammer issues are found and some chapters are bland. would be interesting to see some perspective of adventures about to stumble upon his dungeon or some senior dungeon masters seeing a new name rising the ranks fast.

secret fetish am I right lol

thanks for the chapter

thank you for the chapter

I can appreciate it but when you are reading and he goes spent 1 mil to increase this stat makes you wonder when could he buy Stat improvements

The story is great so far and you can tell that the author is having fun writing it. If I had to complain about something it would be the lack of explaining about the system he made and it's ins and outs. Other than that love the story so far and enjoying the update speed sometimes I find myself wishing for more

wonderful read so far