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System: Daily login!!, jackpot on the first day!!!

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What is System: Daily login!!, jackpot on the first day!!!

Lisez le roman System: Daily login!!, jackpot on the first day!!! écrit par l'auteur Sug_Madic_xx2 publié sur WebNovel. Taufik D'Archy was just an ordinary Boy who lived an Ordinary Life in an Ordinary environment. His Ordinary Life Changed when A Daily Login system Appeared in his life. [The World Is Not Simple As The...

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Taufik D'Archy was just an ordinary Boy who lived an Ordinary Life in an Ordinary environment. His Ordinary Life Changed when A Daily Login system Appeared in his life. [The World Is Not Simple As The Master Thinking] [Many Danger Lurking In The Darkness] [Many Hidden Wolrd For Master To Explore] [And Many Mystery Masters Have To Uncover] With The power he got from System Can our MC Overcome His Trial?, let's follow his journey, as he Overcome the Trial one by one... #SlowPace #Don'tHaveMuchAction

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Kingshadow2324
Kingshadow2324Lv15Kingshadow2324

pedophilia.. teacher want to date the main character. Main character is a child.

Alanray64
Alanray64Lv14Alanray64

It’s hard to give this novel a fair assessment as it is obviously from a non speaking English writer. My criticism is that the author took no pains to seek a proofreader to assist him with this and instead relied on translated words which as we all know, does not give a fair result. A comment about his use of the word retard was used instead of regressed and his explanation was the translation had it as that. I found this novel a little to far fetched, more a wish fantasy if anything, everything just gets handed to him on a silver plate. I felt no connection to the Mc and in fact found him to be tiresome and to childish to take seriously. The novel appeared initially interesting however after trying to follow the story and combined with the terrible sentences/grammar, it died a quick death in my mind. Only advice to give is as mentioned before, proofreading is urgently required and then check again. Just wasn’t worth the time.

Isaiah_Caudill
Isaiah_CaudillLv13Isaiah_Caudill

Very very good love it just make sure to fix the translations because right now it’s hard to understand

WisWaifu21
WisWaifu21Lv3WisWaifu21

Just needs the words to be polished but other than that it's a good novel

IBOR
IBORLv4IBOR

Great Job Untill Now Just Needs Some Fixing With The Mistypes Author -san if you want i can be your editor for free if you plan to continue this novel 🤝🤝✌🏻

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