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Cultured_Daoist693hRépondu à Trolly1206Ch 30 Money speaks -21- Cultured_Daoist699hRépondu à Joethedeath
I don't know but I have written in a little poetic manner so, this choice of words feels better but, it depends on reader reads it.
Thus, he was deeply gratuitous toward Bai Lung. After all, he wasn't like Saintess, who had the Sect Master as her father and was crowned as a 'Grand Disciple' the moment she was born even if she wasn't that deeply connected to family. - Cultured_Daoist699hRépondu à Joethedeath
Well hope in your recovery that way you can upgrade to privilege!
And Bai Lung had pretty well expected this, the truth is Ling Fei didn't make that plan, it's Bai Lung who had pushed Ling Fei to make such a plan. - Cultured_Daoist699hRépondu à
I did that too, but on the follow up, I felt it being better and catch on flow.
Thus, he was deeply gratuitous toward Bai Lung. After all, he wasn't like Saintess, who had the Sect Master as her father and was crowned as a 'Grand Disciple' the moment she was born even if she wasn't that deeply connected to family. - Cultured_Daoist6912hRépondu à Joethedeath
No, it means to say consecutively. ( Liam-Liam ) One after another...
He was giving her Liam- Liam, hitting her weak spot Baam- Baam. - Cultured_Daoist6912hRépondu à Joethedeath
I mean, he is supposed to be 'typical Chinese protagonist'
As for the rest of you... You are all gays, son of no father, start learning how to spread your legs bunch of retards, your bloodline is already disappointed in you, unable to differentiate what's right and what's wrong... Have eyes but failed to see Mt.Tai," Ling Fei roared with his might. - Cultured_Daoist6912hRépondu à Joethedeath
Stuffed* Irritated for... Stuffed = sealed, eaten like horse, etc... It symbilizes the action of chains to his soul.
Exactly in front of them was Ling Fei who seemed to be angry and irritated for being stuffed by soul-piercing chains. - Cultured_Daoist6913hRépondu à Joethedeath
My defence: it was auto correct
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I don't know but I read it and it make sense. I don't see error on that one
And Bai Lung had pretty well expected this, the truth is Ling Fei didn't make that plan, it's Bai Lung who had pushed Ling Fei to make such a plan. - Cultured_Daoist6914hRépondu à
In my defence on that character; all I can say is his luck was reduced! If you think this minor trash ( protagonist ) wasn't well written, you can suggest me in how to improve
As for the rest of you... You are all gays, son of no father, start learning how to spread your legs bunch of retards, your bloodline is already disappointed in you, unable to differentiate what's right and what's wrong... Have eyes but failed to see Mt.Tai," Ling Fei roared with his might. - Cultured_Daoist6914hRépondu à
You are a live saver, hope you upgrade to privilege and help me more haha💀
And Bai Lung had pretty well expected this, the truth is Ling Fei didn't make that plan, it's Bai Lung who had pushed Ling Fei to make such a plan. - Cultured_Daoist6916hRépondu à God_shiva98Ch 20 Money speaks - 11
- Cultured_Daoist6922hRépondu à JoethedeathCh 29 Money Speaks! 20
- Cultured_Daoist6923hRépondu à Joethedeath
Thanks, I'll fix it
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Big bread father, a saying for a bread winner, a big one, ( his identity as sect master of gold rank sect which is definitely a big one, maybe he should be a golden beard or golden goose 🤔 )
Ling Fei: "..." ( it must be because of that big bread father... Ughhh! Don't respect your father Saintess, respect me, I am willing to help me, you should think of me and yourself not your father... Sigh! You left me no choice ) - Cultured_Daoist691dRépondu à unBoludoMas
Bai Lung!
While he sucked her left breast, he began to squeeze her right one. He let his instructive thought win his body. - Cultured_Daoist691dRépondu à Joethedeath
As in metaphor way: meaning enchanting of good.
" What a fucking white you are, " He rumbles, his voice dripping with raw adultery, the sin of lust. - Cultured_Daoist691dRépondu à Joethedeath
Liam-Liam as in motion, my books is fully filled with metaphors.
He was giving her Liam- Liam, hitting her weak spot Baam- Baam. - Cultured_Daoist691dRépondu à Joethedeath
Thanks!
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