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Honestly, a really good start to the novel. The author has created a lived in world that displays excellent world building. The author is also excellent at writing descriptions as I can picture the scenes happening in my mind. This will be a wonderful novel.
It should be "who believes in shamanism and stuff?" That's what I was talking about :)
Maybe it's just the bond between the two of them, but he seems to accept what the old man is saying awfully quickly and very quickly begins questioning the priests.
I would maybe break up this paragraph. It jumps a bit from the orb, to his parents, and to the stars. It kinda threw me off as I read it.