World_Eater117
So there isn't really much to say honestly, I'm an introvert.Reading is like breathing for me, it's essential, if U had to breathe only for every other hour.I'm pretty new to the writing block, that's that
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Apollo is a Greek god, not norse
That's kinda racist, I've read tons of amazing books by Chinese authors
I'll attack him and kill him, if it doesn't work, he won't kill a helpless old man
I walked all the way from china on one foot
Too much information
thank you, I don't see why everyone has to have a bad backstory
Immortal technique: Abstaining Monk
I'm literally in bed laughing and crying my eyes out
Honestly I've been disappointed with what I've read so far.Writing quality is so poor and story progression is just all over the place, you can't just skip parts of a story if it has impact on the storyline.You told us something about the orphanage that brought a qualitative change to the mc but you didn't specify it, just kept it vague.It's too late for this book but take note on your next book.
no, that's inaccurate, he was promised power which the mc didn't have to give
that's a low blow
are you sure you should be using solace in this sentence.
Ok, this just got real stupid, wouldn't be need an actual modicum of power to tempt him, or was he so desperate that he just believed anything he was told.
cuz dat makes so much sense
Hey Author, you're doing a good job somewhat, but pay attention to detail, I don't know if other people are the same. But all these little inconsistencies in grammar is a big turnoff for me.