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Vizzard99

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just an aspiring writer and avid reader.

2021-10-07 JointGlobal
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    A fun read. with a MC with cool powers. I'm a sucker for shadow powers and ice powers so this scratches that niche for me. though despite the positive review I'm leaving it I do have a few critiques. There's a lot of spelling and grammar errors I noticed immediately when I first started reading. one that really was jarring was words like "swallow" was being spelled as Shallow. I do love the gimmicky kinda memey nature of the writing and how zero incorporates earth world culture in this novel. it's cute to see references like that and thoroughly enjoy. though sadly besides zero I really do not care about any of the side characters. well that is besides Misha. besides zero I really enjoy her growth. I love the underdog story of her and how she's catching up to Hiro. also despite the name of the story I was hoping there would be more Parallel memories. so far with only 2 which the second one kinda came out surprisingly. with the whole parallel universe theory and etc I was hoping maybe he would use these memories and abilities (which he seems to get from said memories) to change his fighting style pretty drastically. all In all it's really enjoyable. the only ongoing novel I read from chapter one to current in 2 weeks. (note I have read full web novels before to completion. but not ongoing to current.) give it a read. might have fun.

Border World: Your Given Name

Human beings, or all living creatures, are not created to live alone. Instead, we thrive off of each other, learn from each other, and experience life from each other. These interactions of love, hatred, violence, and care are all part of this world and the way of life. No one is born and destined to die alone. Whether it be to reach out our hands to those in need or stomp on their fingers to climb higher and reach new heights, none of it is done purely alone. We strive, fight, survive, and even kill. We ingrain these moments into our lives, and we ingrain these people we meet into our world with only a few breaths and words. These beings live on in other people's minds and memories for years, all underneath something as simple as a name. Names received from those whose lives have just begun or those whose lives have ended. This is the story of those who have been given a name and the journey they take in a brave new world. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ "They're not just monster's. This is their world just as much as it's ours." After years of struggling as a low-class Hunter in the Borderworld Matthew Harrison awakens his ability. "Kin" the ability to name and add monsters to his Family. This is the story of his family through the new land known as "The Borderworld". ************************************ Authors Note Hello everyone. Im a novice writer and want to just take this time to say I'm sorry fory style of writing. I don't really have anyone to help edit it or give me creative feedback or criticism. so please feel free to help me, I'd appreciate it!

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