Astra_D_Satella
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Book Title = The last lights War : The fall of the Righteous Rating = 8/10 Plot = Good Story flow = kinda hard to follow. Other wise rating would 10/10. Favorite Chapter : chap 2 Favorite Character : Abel 3 things I liked : 1) The plot is hard to follow but when you understand it it's pretty good. 2) Mc power 3) Power ranking System of the world in the novel. 3 Things I didnt like: 1) I am not into harem and stuff so yah... 2) Also not into romance. 3) story flow is Too quick. Actual review The novel was good. But the story flow is too quick. Unlike other cliche novels where the story and world building takes place step by step , here it's too fast. Over all the story was good. This is just my opinion that I think You explained the novel like you are writing a manhwa and the flow is too quick (Cause you are not seeing any pics just the text)
flying gravity And Dark magic
yes
i know it doesnt use the same principle here .i just named it that because i didnt have any cool name.
yah but slightly stronger than that.
fixed .I will proofread later
i actually forgot about it cause i was focusing on making my own character