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Quite interesting story tbh. maybe you should check it, or must check it! The writing is quite... good. Keep writing dude, hope people read this gem.
Remove the "ROAR".
This is supposed to be her. I try to do my best
Why are you laughing at such name? Insulting the native name from the people of china!? I swear i will crush you down if i ever see you. Don't ever laugh at china again!!
It's actually a good novel. Nice writing, some words probably need to be latinized. I don't know anything about chinese words, so it'll be helpful for you to write the latinized words too. Development is actually crazy. It went from 0-10 in a second. Some of her act is actually an offendable crime, which is quite funny and downer for me at the same time. 10/10 mindblowingly insane mc. she need help, get her to a nearby therapist/hospital for the insane.
I'm a 15 years old from India, and i love the story you made. My pp became hard when reading each of your paragraph. But sadly, the grammar, the comas need to be tidy. I cannot push out my com if you can't write it well. Please help me, I'm aroused, write it more better! 🇮🇳🇮🇳Love, from India 🇮🇳🇮🇳
wohooo
need to add the word 'he'
It's horrible. Chapter one obviously need some upgrading, including the grammar and the way the story being written. It's plain, bland, nothing to be quite put as special. I'm suggesting you to read some real novel, and look how they are being written. If you are not a native english speaker, then try using some grammar website. Hopefully it will help you in the end.
typo. Strongest not strogest