TimEaterOfWorlds
I eat worlds…. And tacos
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Your X.g is 4, opposing team’s X.g is 0.2, lose the final 2-0
Back then this wouldn’t even count as creepy, just a normal thing tbh
True
Hopefully there is a system in place to prevent abuse, the system already makes it easy to get rich. Should probably be only for investment of equity and the like
True but they don’t claim it’s healthier cause it kills germs but just cause their tradition says it’s healthier and they assign a number of other benefits to it that in reality just come from the only real reason it could be called “healthier” which is less germs and bacteria, such as aiding pregnancy etc..
Story is fairly interesting, and has a lot of potential. I am excited to see where the author takes the story. While the story has a number of good points such as having an interesting concept, strong system and a fairly smart non beta MC, it also has several problems that I’d hope to see improve as the story continues. I don’t believe the author is a native English speaker though i coudl be wrong, so there are a number of wrongly used words, places with poor grammar, misspelled words and general dissonance in the story, though they have little impact on the story itself and don’t affect the reading experience that much. There are also a number of strange choices, background information and world building decisions that negatively impact the flow and immersion of the story but they aren’t too numerous or aggregious and I think that as the author continues they should improve in this aspect. Overall it’s a promising novel and I’m looking forward to seeing what happens
So the salary is biweekly I assume, might want to mention that to ensure clarity
That’s very quick, usually the prospective employees would not be waiting in the building but would just leave resumes and contact information
No need for a kindly in there
Hear*
Hear*
Very weird to keep reading them saying Hellow
Ok so business expenses count as investments, im assuming since it’s coming from MC’s bank account and not the stores revenue. This will make it easy for the mc to become rich af
Why would a parts supplier have that kind of car? This novel hs an interesting premise but there are many strange things in it that make little sense and ruin the immersion and flow of the story
45,000*
Second half of this paragraph doesn’t make much sense even if the reader can guess what the author meant