Thank you for your comment! It means very much to me that my story can bring out the emotions that I want from my readers.

thanks for catching that!

Zac's character design - AI generated. It is as close as I can get to how he looks. Just focus more on the face than the clothes.

Galen's character design is now available: AI Generated

until it's built up correctly, until he's reached an age where he can actually do something.

Great story. I guess the only thing I didn't really like was how fast he was to realize that he got reincarnated but everything else is good.

Katrina's character art is now available: AI-Generated.

Ray's character art is now available: AI-Generated.

Author's Review: The beginning is a bit shabby. It could have been better if I had the writing skills or had put more effort into it. The stability of updates is not the best, and I will sometimes do weekly uploads or daily. Depends on my mood, imagination, and motivation. Overall the updates(to me) are the worst part. I am doing my best to improve my writing skills, make things more interesting and make them make sense. I can't accurately review my world background or character design. That is for you readers to decide. Please leave feedback with your thoughts and suggestions on how I can make something better, and criticism is welcomed.

your review is much appreciated. if you have any comments or feedback about what can be edited or have any tips that would help the story out, would also mean very much. I'm open to criticism as well.

Chapter Updated. Makes more sense now ig. Please, boost my ego by telling me how great it is :')

When you want to go skydiving, you want the donut go back to whale when someone thinks they feel please just want you to let you know when sometimes the heart flies they also can't catch the bug.

Very interesting. There were definitely some sentences that could've been re-worded, but I love the whole background of her being an alien and world background is simple, but it is great because a lot of people are familiar with New York, which saves you time having to describe the kind of place they are in.

"Something on your mind, Mrs -?" Would sound better here in my opinion

This Chapter was updated to give the mother more of a personality. Hopefully, this sounds better.

I do say, if the flimper flomper had dimper domper, then that would mean skimper skomper was a swimper swomper.

The eminence in shadow mc vibes XD

I'm coming back!

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