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The writing quality meets my standard. I like how the writer describe the emotions and vibes of the characters pretty well. The story development is great, I like how the settings and the characters are introduced. If you like or interested in Basketball, then i reccommend you give this story a try! Good work author!
Noted! Thank you so much!
Outstanding story! I really like how the author is building the characters personality and vibes really well. And also, how he explains the Aether system in simple words so I can understand them quickly. The writing needs a little bit of editing, the imagery and story development is great! Keep up the good work author, I'm looking forward for more chapters. This novel is recommendable!
As a fantasy nerd, I love this novel. The narrative accompanied by amazing constructions of characters can surely become immersed readers to the story. Not to mention the imagery of this novel is on point. The plot is nice and I am looking forward for more chapters! I will add this to my library. Great work author.!
This story has great potential! The plot and the way the author writes the narrative of the characters really are comprehensible and makes the readers immersed in the characters' lives. However, the grammar is a bit off and the capitalization of words needs a little work tho. But overall, the author is a pretty great job!
The plot is great, and the writing style is amazing. Author write this in a way that readers will not be confused and that is a plus! Still need an editing at the grammar parts tho. But overall, if you like fantasy romance novels, this is highly recommended. Great job author, keep it up! Waiting for more chapters.
If you love werewolves type of novels, then this is perfect for you. The emotional aspects are really on the point where the readers feel immersed in the characters. The plot is sooo good so far and the first chapter is really interesting. Great work author! More chapters to come. Very recommendable.!
I am loving this! The plot is superb and the way the author write this is amazing. Not to mention the very detailed imagery that makes the readers fully immersed in the story and in the characters' perspective and emotion. Great Work author! This novel have more potential! Very recommendable. Keep it up.
First of all, the plot is amazing! The first chapters where the main character struggles, is just felt. I mean i am immersed in his life. Great writing also, the way the author writes this novel is very comprehensible, which is a big plus. Great job author! This story have great potential! Keep it up! Very recommendable!
This novel has potential! The plot is so good. The way the characters carry their emotions, the author did a great job making the readers immersed in them. However, the grammar department needs a little work BUT overall, I would say this is a great novel. Great Job author! More chapters to come and I am here for it!
I'm not a fan of thriller and action novels, but this one is an exception. The detailed fights and action, the superb writing style of the author not to mention the outstanding imagery- AAAAA I'm here for it. I am a fan of fantasy novels, so I am definitely loving this. Great work author, I'll add this to my library.