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DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_WinchesterThat’s a good point, it seems I need to add a lot more details to things
I also need to train my byakugan, I've neglected that the last few days but it would definitely be nice to get some proficiency in it and master it. Even though this world doesn't have chakra, I can't see it in people's body, but I can still see people. I assume since it doesn't run on chakra, it's just a natural ability and I can see energies of different worlds inside people. I'll try opening the byakugan first.- DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
Do you have any good AI recommendations?
Tadashi and Hana have been travelling together for 2 years now in the Demon Slayer corps. They met during the final selection when they had saved each other from a particular demon and worked together to slay it. Since then, they have been the best of friends and even travel together. - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
I have seen them now, I’ll try to stretch out the training time and give her more time to perfect her usage of her new gifts
I also need to train my byakugan, I've neglected that the last few days but it would definitely be nice to get some proficiency in it and master it. Even though this world doesn't have chakra, I can't see it in people's body, but I can still see people. I assume since it doesn't run on chakra, it's just a natural ability and I can see energies of different worlds inside people. I'll try opening the byakugan first. - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
You’re right, that does seem a little sus now that you point it out
"Correct. I just know about you." - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
I will keep that in mind, im still trying to work out the kinks of conversation in the story
Tadashi and Hana have been travelling together for 2 years now in the Demon Slayer corps. They met during the final selection when they had saved each other from a particular demon and worked together to slay it. Since then, they have been the best of friends and even travel together. - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
I can change it just for you ;)
"Ara, good job on getting her here quickly, come with us and we may talk after she is stable." With that she turns back around and starts walking in the direction the other girls headed. - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
That’s…probably true. I didn’t go with that since she did kill a demon and help an injured slayer to get healed. I thought that with as kind as Kagaya seems, that he’d give her the benefit of the doubt
As Maki finished her little look around of what she could see of the estate, the girls of the estate have run up to her and proceed to take Hana from her arms and placed on a stretcher before running back off towards the doors. Someone who she instantly recognizes as Kocho Shinobu, has walked up to her and Tadashi with a smile. - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
I didn’t think of that from that point of view, I can definitely try that out
Previously - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
Will do, I didn’t even notice the typo
"The demon isn't head yet, I need you fancy dancy blade to kill it, I don't have one. Quickly please, before it regenerates. Then we can get the girl some help before she bleeds out." - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
This is Culling Games Acr Maki, at this point she has 0 cursed energy. I believe
'Demons? Then is this the Demon Slayer world? If so, that might actually be a really good thing! Since demons are the only 'supernatural' in this world, humans learned their breathing techniques. Since that's a body technique, even with heavenly restriction, I should be able to learn it as well!' - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
I have a relative idea how they work, but I just feel odd about using them, even in writing, but that’s a good idea
(A/N: once again, I'm from the US and not well versed on Japanese honorifics, forgive me.) - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
Where the kid has no limbs? I plan to research more stuff in depth for future chapters
(A/N: I couldn't find about about where you'd sell game in 1920's Japan, so this'll have to do. I also don't know the value of currency at the time, plus I am American. I'll be quite vague for now so if anyone has any suggestions about how to do the next portion better and future money situations.) - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
That…is definitely one way to get over it, that’s for sure
With that, Maki sets off into a random direction. Not walking, but a jogging speed, sometimes sprinting. She figured out that her speed is obviously extremely fast. To an outside perspective, it'd almost be like she was becoming a blur and nearly teleporting. - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
*Spoilers* No secret mission, but it is the first 2, definitely a feel good journey that sates my imaginative mind, and being the good guy in different worlds. Honestly I don’t like feeling like the bad guy. I’ll read stories with an anti-hero mc, but I have a hard time reading evil mc stories
This is the end of Amelia Steele, an assassin of earth, and the beginning of "Heavenly Restriction: The Multiverse Maki Zen'in." - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
I have a draft story that I never posted and actually did that, and had an ai choose other options too, should I try it out in the future?
"Well first of all, since you know what's going on and haven't asked what happened, I feel no need to explain it. What's going to happen now is that we'll spin a wheel to decide who you'll be and/or what powers you get. There are multitudes of possibilities, all with equal chance to land on. Then after that is chosen, we can decide what is next based on what it lands on. Got it?" - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
The Holy Lamp!
In the endless expanse of space and the myriad of colors that litter the distance in all angles, the only other things to be seen are an old godly looking gentleman relaxing on a simple but regal looking throne, and our Amelia laying down suspending the the infinite space. - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_Winchester
To be completely honest, I nearly forgot about this part, ins till new to this and my memory sucks, I’ll have to go a bit more in depth about this
"We are basically done here, last things however, I'll be giving you a status panel. Not to be mistaken for a system, it will not help you get stronger, it won't answer you, it won't help you, ALL it will do is display your basic information. Name, age, abilities, current and past worlds visited, and I'll have it save photos for memories for you. I'll also give you a longer lifespan to travel different worlds, you'll age in them, but it will reset whenever you want to travel a new world. Also, do keep in mind that you CAN get stronger of course, physically, mentally, and skillfully. Your first world will be a suprise. Goodbye." - DaddyToast3mthRépondu à Moon_WinchesterCh 3 Chapter 3: Village
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Oops, I deleted the wrong comment, I thought mine duplicated but it didn’t
Playful Cloud: A 3 sectioned staff connected by metal rings. Its ability is to enhance the physical abilities of the user.