Airiane
Lazy artist, writer, gamer and a certified fan girl. Author of Barrett: Heart of Promise, Coffee in the Summer and many more. Check out my official SocMed account for more updates!
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This is a great start! I really thought that the story us on historical period but then it was all an acting! The author got me there. A great start with the chapter and spice up, plus the synopsis is so meaningful and deep.
It is a nice start, Eve and Sam hits it on the very start. I hope the attraction between them will be fruitful and I wonder what are the challenges Evie will face as she has the ability to heal. I think the author can elaborate more to describe the characters and the world setring. Keep it up and good luck!
I like the unique storytelling that uses the narrator's voice. The characters seemed to a powerhouse as I've read some familiar names. I hope you continue the good work. (Just some side comment to refrain the use of symbols like '&' '/' too much, I think its better to have a proper 'and' 'or' for the novel)
I am really attracted at these kinds of names, my Alexios is already King here ;)
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Thank you Ilyana for the honest review :) And yes, this is still not fully furnished. It was a fan fiction I wrote in my early teens, and though I have revised and changed some phrases. There is still a lot of improvement to do and I'll go exert more effort on this. I am glad that you read my work. I hope you will keep on supporting as the story progress. ~~~Airiii
The introduction of the this story is quite expressive and elaborative. I got a glimpse of the characters. I like the authors way of relating the story with the use of the phrases from excerpt. The author also expresses a deep way to reach it readers with the use of words. I hope you keep it up, it is a nice work with interesting characters.
I totally agree on this.
I knew this is coming... I am crying...