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Feel like it should be at most Legendary-----, feels like a unique skill more than a legendary one.

I know this is two years old, but I got reminded of this discussion by a like, and I don't really care. Anyways, to help you understand how I and several others mean what we're trying to tell you, here's an example. Say there are only 100 girls on the planet. 25 of them are 6s, 10 are 1s, 20 are 10s, 35 are 7s, etc. The mean would NOT be 5.5. Basically, TLDR, there aren't an equal number of ones as there are twos, twos as there are fives, etc. 5.5 is only the average if we assume there is an equal number of every rating. Personally, most girls I know would be somewhat offended if they were rated a 5, because that is typically considered by most people out there to be below average.

I very much don't like the fact that Ethereal has a capital E in this sentence, like the boss he killed. Raises some death flags if you ask me. Maybe it's foreshadowing that she's descended from an Ethereal, like how he's presumably descended from a divine?

This is, presumably, a café. Most cafés, at least out of the ones I've seen, don't serve most of those things. Also, it's just breakfast. He can always have something better for lunch or dinner.

It's your story, but personally I would show the total after he finishes a fight, and I'd show what he gets from bosses.

Pretty good story so far. Fairly unique premise.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I feel like you probably should've saved before lying to this guy about the group that murdered his family, tbh.