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Zeref_6422dCommenté+1 (Never seen a fanfic for Memorize)
1. MemorizedetailStrongest Homeroom Teacher Is Actually A Physical Education TeacherAnime et bandes dessinées · GreenBlue17- Zeref_6426dPosté
I really like the story but I can’t enjoy it. The reason is because you have written in the synopsis that the update schedule is Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday but you haven’t updated on Tuesday and it doesn’t seem like you will update on Thursday either. Even if the story is good, I would recommend that you don’t waste your time on this story since the author has dropped it once before.
detailStrongest Homeroom Teacher Is Actually A Physical Education TeacherAnime et bandes dessinées · GreenBlue17 - Zeref_64210dCommenté
Do you actually mean CQC
- QCQ lv. 2 [ 15/ 200 ] - Zeref_64212dCommenté
It’s useless since you have mentioned that even Dou Gods can’t sense his cultivation near the Pavilion.
He then put the mask on his face. This mask not only concealed his aura but also prevented others from probing his cultivation, even if a Dou God came, they wouldn't be able to discern his level.detailBTTH: Starting With Auctioning Green Lotus Core FlameAnime et bandes dessinées · RebornAnew_author - Zeref_64213dCommentéCh 2 Another world and Devil fruit
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*Soul/Spirit Elder
"Wulin little brother, both Mu Xi and I are Soul Sage-level powerhouses. Although we're not at level 39 yet, these people next to you are. It would be safer to go together." - Zeref_64215dCommenté
*Yuan Dan (Never seen anyone use Ether realm)
"So it's you." Upon seeing the green fire surging from Lin Yan's body, Lin Langtian instantly recognized it. But after feeling Lin Yan's strength again, which was at the pinnacle of the Ether Realm, his expression became somewhat disdainful.detailI cannot be Martial Ancestor, then I will be Emperor Yan.Anime et bandes dessinées · Johanssen10 - Zeref_64216dCommenté
*Loen Kingdom
He was in the Kingdom of Ruen, in the capital city of Backlund. The current king was George III.detailLord of The Mysteries: The Arrival of the New Black EmperorAnime et bandes dessinées · Jer0086 - Zeref_64217dRépondu à Louriem_9876
But you have written that there is only one black gold level guardian, which is incorrect.
Nie Feng simply smiled because he knew quite a bit about this world, either from reading the novel or from the knowledge passed down by Qiu Bai, although most of it was about other subjects. Nonetheless, Nie Feng agreed with Nie Li's statement. Even though it sounded arrogant, the level of this city was very low, as there was only one Black Gold level guardian protecting it. - Zeref_64219dCommenté
Can’t you use Martial Spirit instead of Spirit Soul?
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Wasn’t it going to break through to 100,000 years since it said that it was at 99,999 last chapter
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This is a really well written TDG fanfic, but I have a tiny problem with it and it might just be me. It doesn’t use the same terms as the manga like for example it uses spiritual strength instead of soul force and spiritual field instead of soul realm. It bothers me a bit but except for this, the story is good.
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You mean Legend level
Nie Feng simply smiled because he knew quite a bit about this world, either from reading the novel or from the knowledge passed down by Qiu Bai, although most of it was about other subjects. Nonetheless, Nie Feng agreed with Nie Li's statement. Even though it sounded arrogant, the level of this city was very low, as there was only one Black Gold level guardian protecting it. - Zeref_64223dCommenté
You are referring to Medici with they
"It's time to meet Medici. I hope they like the surprise I brought," Lynn said. Then, as if remembering something, he smiled at his divine persona and added, - Zeref_64224dCommenté
*Lord of the Mysteries or Lord of Mysteries
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*Reinette Tinekerr
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Who is Bernie Huang. Do you actually mean Bernadette?
He was quite interested in bluffing Bernie Huang, or rather, in reading Roselle's diary to Bernadette. - Zeref_64224dCommenté
*Sauron family
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Don’t you mean negative effects instead of opportunity?
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