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Thatguyray

Thatguyray

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2021-06-07 JointGlobal
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray3mth
    Répondu à Oladayo_Agundonu

    sorry this works was discontinued

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    Meta Human
    Romance · Thatguyray
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray4mth
    Posté

    Perfect. Can't wait to see how far this book goes. Keep updating author. So far so good. I think MC gonna turn evil because of his demon blood

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    The Infernal Architect
    Fantaisie · SirManga
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray1yr
    Posté

    The author definitely knows what she's doing. The story is well developed and easy to understand. The writing quality isn't that bad and the author sure knows how to keep us hooked.

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    Being Repulished
    Urbain · Alexalee_25
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray1yr
    Posté

    I can see that the author has a lot of potential to make this one of your best reads. Except for a few grammatical errors, this novel is too noch

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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray1yr
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    The cover it's self is creepy. So I bet the novel has a lot of creepy stuff. I've been through the prologue and the first chapter and I gotta say it's more of a poem to me; it's interesting and speaks to me in a different light. There are few chapters so I hope the author can work hard to publish more and maintain a stable update stability. Except for a few grammatical errors everything else is well crafted and well thought. Kudos to the author

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    The World's Consciousness
    Fantaisie · Deadshot269
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray1yr
    Posté

    Hello there, Author here. I changed the plot of this book completely and had to restart it from zero after publishing over 40 chapters to it previously. Am truly sorry for any inconveniences for those who read it before. I hope you can continue following it from here on, thank you. I didn't plant well for the previous plot and just wrote whatever came to my head. Hope you understand. Thank you!

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    Supernatural Untold
    Fantaisie · Thatguyray
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Répondu à EditorTika

    I think It's Polomam23

    Ch 34 Chapter 34: Miss Casper
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    Supernatural Untold
    Fantaisie · Thatguyray
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Répondu à Thatguyray

    Oh sorry, this book used to be called My Ugly Fate. (MUF) but I changed it. When I created this I had intended on making the book about a female actress who loses her career after being an acid victim. Hence the name Ugly fate. But now that u wrote nothing about that, what's the point of keeping the name. Just ignore that.

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    Supernatural Untold
    Fantaisie · Thatguyray
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Répondu à EditorTika

    No I haven't yet, why?

    Ch 34 Chapter 34: Miss Casper
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    Supernatural Untold
    Fantaisie · Thatguyray
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Répondu à Haru_Catty

    oh sorry.....................im new to this whole novel thing. And didn't know what prologue meant. I thought it was just a chapter name. LOL

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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantaisie · Ice_Princesss
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Posté

    Okayyyyyyy, I've been through the first two chapters and I thought I should first praise your well-edited chapters. I found little to no grammar errors and mistakes.........Good work.....I give your writing quality a 5-star rating. Cant wait for the transmigration to take place. Adios.....Im going back to read the rest of the chapters.....

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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantaisie · Ice_Princesss
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Commenté

    punch me

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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantaisie · Ice_Princesss
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
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    mmmmm.........she should have shut her mouth. LOL

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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Commenté

    But shes still going up against them!!!!! I can only imagine her disappointment at the end of the case.

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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
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    FR!

    Every single Cosmo X company court case had the same end result. All the cops knew that the company tested humans with their products and that those 'test subjects' always dropped dead in the end with no trace left of them.
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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantaisie · Ice_Princesss
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
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    This sudden scene change has confused me a bit......I thought she was still in the bar.....Until I saw "SHE GRABBED HER NOTEBOOKS!" I was about to ask if she carried books to the club. lol

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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantaisie · Ice_Princesss
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Commenté

    Great starting.....no grammar errors......Why not? I might not be your number one fan, but I will always be among the top ones.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantaisie · Ice_Princesss
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
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    Wow! nightmares that stress you out that you have to drink! Oh boy, I never want to have any of those

    She pouted and batted her eyelashes to try and persuade him. However, her plan backfired as he did not budge. Usually, she would go to the club if she felt anxious or distraught because of her nightmares. He knew about them and, judging from the calculating look on his face, she could tell that he knew she had another nightmare.
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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantaisie · Ice_Princesss
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Commenté

    So.......im just starting the novel. Hope its fun

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantaisie · Ice_Princesss
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  • Thatguyray
    Thatguyray2yr
    Répondu à Badz_Baddy

    Waza Badz_Baddy: I partially edited the first chapter. Let me know if it solves any issues. I'm still editing, there are a lot of things ill be adding and changing. Thanks!

    He didn't know what he had ever done to this girl to earn such treatment from her.
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