Review Detail of Thatguyray in The World's Consciousness

The cover it's self is creepy. So I bet the novel has a lot of creepy stuff. I've been through the prologue and the first chapter and I gotta say it's more of a poem to me; it's interesting and speaks to me in a different light. There are few chapters so I hope the author can work hard to publish more and maintain a stable update stability. Except for a few grammatical errors everything else is well crafted and well thought. Kudos to the author