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the story is really intriguing. I love the cover, and the synopsis reveals nothing of the initial plot twist, which I really appreciated. Perhaps a tighter writing style could make the reading flow better. In any case, your work, your choice, writer. Really good work, I'm glad you're having success.
The story is original, it took me a long time, and it's very nice to have added religious and mythological elements, transforming them in the service of the story. I also like the kind of black humor you have added from time to time. Just a note, if the dialogue takes place between two well-known characters, avoid describing who the sentence belongs to each time the sentence is spoken. Slow down the pace a lot. Keep it going!
I started this novel months ago, with the intention of turning it into a light novel with illustrations in the future and a series of related works. One day in a video game, maybe. I paused the project for a long time, and it actually hurt. Unfortunately, it has happened many times to not receive feedback, and consequently, to feel miserable ... But now I have sent these thoughts away and I try to publish a chapter almost every day, so, if you happen to be around here give me your opinion , let me feel that you are there, so I will be more and more motivated to continue. Thank you.