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Hmmm, I'm not suuuuure (I love these comments lol)

HMMMMM (I love these people loll

I like it, the writing quality is great, each character is well-rounded and multi-faced which I love. Every character has their own unique voice and stand out, Alan is pure anger, Sayers is a dark sarcastic, Olive oil- Oliver is relateable and easy to connect with, and Ms. Ezra is more kind natured

Good read, too much background for me though

It's good, pacing and everything is great. Only problem I have is I feel the background could be summarized better, but overall really good

Its pretty good like the modern aspect a few fixes are needed but overall pretty good. I would say it could use a little work and more backround on the character and his friend but its good in all honesty

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

sorry the last chapter was so short I had quite a few things to do yesterday

hey guys this is my first ever book so if you read the chapters please make sure to comment and tell me if I need to improve anything thank you

this is an amazing book you should really turn into like an actual series GG my guy good job