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the mc is a dog, he only knows how to be h☆rny, instead of practicing his skills in the first part 9f the story, all he did is upgrade his talent and f♤ck the girls, the mc has no depth what so ever, it makes the mc look like a 200lbs greasy old man who take advantage of girls in my mind because of his h☆rnyness... not worth reading
but harem readers also read stories that only has one love interest so the market with only one love interest is obviuosly much bigger... you cant tell me that harem novel readers dont read stories that only have one love interest lets be real, no one is averse to reading a story with only one ml/fl unless they have a fetish or something.
the translation is complete trash, its hard to read because you cant picture it in your head because your constantly trying to decipher what you are reading like, when the author is explaining about martial arts realm and then suddenly god of came up, like where did that came from? there is no martial art realm that is called god of war in the explanation of the martial arts realm, its really confusing
great story but if you ever make another book make it not harem please, by making it a harem you basically limit your market,for people like us who dont read harem type stories cause it make us feel uncomfortable could only feel pity its a great story, keep it up, its only a pity that its a harem so imma drop this...