I apologize for the mistake, I have been trying to change it but after uploading it, I haven't been able to change it due to some reason.

Yes, I would love to discuss it.

Yes, sure I would love to know your ideas because I have only been writing my novel from my perspective and knowing another person's perspective will help me improve more, and trust me when I say it's never too late to write a novel, so I wouldn't recommend you to drop your idea.

Thank You for your praise, and I would really encourage you to write your novel and I would love to read it.

I apologize for my mistakes, I have corrected them and thank you for your pointers.

I apologize for such mistake, I have fixed it, thank you for pointing it out.

Yes, thank you for your response, I have edited the chapter.

Very detailed character creation thumbs up for that, and good world development, Great use of vocabulary Great storytelling and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.

Very detailed character and world development, Great storytelling and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.

Very detailed character and world development, Great storytelling and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.

Yes u r ryyt but I also mentioned der that it was his parents who didn't allow der servants to tell him more than he needed plus I wanted d readers to have more background knowledge about d continent thru Dai Chen.

thanks for your comment, I will try to improve my writing....

thanks..

Very detailed character and world development, Great narration and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.

Very detailed character and world development, Great narration and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.

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Very detailed character and world development, Great narration and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.

yes I have reviewed your book.

Very detailed character and world development, Great narration and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.

Very detailed character and world development, Great narration and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. Best of luck to both the author and the book.