Klillo

it's my personal opinion so no offense intended. status ch 29. there are few spelling and grammar mistakes and they don't bother while reading. the writing style is easy to understand and follow. the story is a little bit slow but starts to advance now. I guess the introduction is over. while I'm not a fan of multiple povs I'll read through it because im curious about that uncommon power. it's something different from the rest that we get to see like devouring or so. as of now the character templates are not fully completed but it's like MC is an extra next to the side character MC (typical son of destiny). for "just" 30 chapters iIwont write about updating stability. might be just author newfound motivation because of a new creation. the world is a typical cultivation world but it's not much known yet. I like those tho so I give 4stars.

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it's not about the cloning even tho I misunderstood. it's about depth of the world. no one would like Warhammer 40k if primarchs were mass produced u know. force users are valuable in star wars but that action devalues them greatly. and it wouldn't be too bad for the story of MC could just create a practice method that usable for people with like 3 or 4k midichlorians. they aren't able to actively use force as one needs to have like 5k or so if I remember correctly. and coupled with maybe something like echani they could still be the mainstay of the army

Darth nihilus and two other sith also brought down the Jedi order to a few dozen or less ig. that was after the mandalorian wars. the order only survived cuz a former Jedi in exile killed those sith

i think that he should take a similar path to Warhammer 40k when it comes to force scions/astartes. In order for them not to be influenced by the force they should be "forceless". instead going through a brutal training regimen comparable to that of palpatines guards. Cuz just cloning force users is just not a real order like Jedi or the sith alliances. or is it cuz of plot that u want them to be influenced and get some traitor legions?

why not riot ? fifteen years of balancing experience

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that's exactly what I mean. it's called character development. don't forget that he kills without batting an eye what most people would also call a burden or at least something they need to overcome

i thought he's suspended