yoshhh....... this was another level of system novel, ! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! It's too detailed and imaginary, is that the right word? Anyway it's freakin good!!
This is masterpiece, great work make me think i am living in the story while i read it. you should keep this good work, i'am glad to know such a unique story appears among those mainstream one, do not stop writing.
the story is good, i don't have to imagine much to draw what the MC expression on his face or his appearance, all of it described perfectly in the story. keep it up for you author!!!!