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As long as his long lost NTR-ed woman isn’t gonna be married off to someone else in this life. That drama was nasty tbh, but i can leave it in the past. After all, what’s a harem to the one woman he can’t get? Takes half the enjoyment away from it just thinking about it. Everyone seems to remember only fragments of their past lives, like skills or abilities, but only he actually remembers everything, so he’s suffering enough already

Nope, i read a couple more chaps and wanted to leave a review myself, but a few others mentioned my points themselves, so i didn’t bother.

Hmm, so the hottest character (the mom/aunt?) is not in harem.. What’s the point of her being then?

Finally someone who shares my point.. I managed to endure 250 chaps of what you said, and then the power scaling and logic completely broke for me… A mere mid grade world, and yet countless people within Mc’s realm range can wipe the floor with him, making his whole system shindig worthless. I had enough when Mc was 1 realm behind Saintesses, and had to struggle like a turd against one, all while complaining that saintesses are stronger than him and whatnot, all because of weapon mastery and nothing else.

Read through first 30, and i can say the novel is quite interesting. A bit too many changes of POV, and a little lack of depth in first chaps, but i can see the potential. I want to see more of the Mc and his thoughts, instead of cycling through various chars’ pov’s since my attention can only be focused on a single main char instead of several.

I don’t know who the Mc is tbh… And i hope he won’t only get little girls in his harem. Some good mature ladies (teachers/nobles) should be mixed in for variety.

Problem is, the dominant personality would be the otherworlder, so that’s no longer his brother. It would’ve been fine if other memories merged into Kevin, and not Kevin’s memories into another’s.

Yea yeah we already know… Way too overused technique. Not good enough to create a new writing style, it needs other techniques to not become overly monotonous.

The writing style is a little cringe. The cadence feels repetitive, so the attempt to generate impact falls flat at times. Better keep it simple and only use that technique occasionally. By technique i mean the part where you say one thing, then add details in short sentences one after the other. I’ve seen it used waaay to much so the impact it creates becomes less and less

This story has already gone downhill.. everything is too absurd, and the system seems too useless at this point. A good point to leave the novel here