I am very impressed by the story so far. There is a lot of action, with some very well-written space battles (Those can be tricky). The writing style is fluid and very casual. I like the jump into action with no info-dumping. I would, however, like to see the world explored more in detail in the coming chapters! Good job!

So far, it is a very interesting story, kind of like Akira meets Scarface. It certainly has not played out the way I expected it to from the early chapters. Very good prose. Looking forward to more plot developments!

Let me start off by saying that I love the title to this story! Overall, I find it incredibly well-written with vivid, yet bleak, descriptions and solid use of metaphor. There is not too much information given, which keeps you invested (Instead of info-dumping). And despite the whole apocalypse setting, the story is pretty self-contained. Well done!

Another good chapter. Have a stone!

I think it is a very good story - Certainly a depressing one. I feel the writing style can be a bit confusing at times. There's lots of text blocks and it can hard to discern who is speaking during certain scenes, but there's a strong premise there. Have a power stone!

This is a very good story, short and sweet and packed with action. Admittedly, it would have been nice to have an extended epilogue, perhaps a chapter that suggests the two boxers are going to travel the world and continue the fight. Otherwise, fun read!

This story is simply incredible! A little of worldbuilding at the beginning, then we're thrown right into the action. The opening scene reminds me of Sunshine, a movie that I love. Sci-fi in general is an amazing genre and it is always fun to see what people do with it.

This was an interesting read, very well-written! Really like the protagonist and the descriptive writing style. Hope to see more boxing action!

I love the worldbuilding in this one. I particularly like how things are revealed gradually, unlike most stories which utilize info dumps in the first chapter. With so little context in the first chapter, it makes you want to read on. Good job

I really like the writing style used in this story, it feels very frantic and urgent. It is deliciously violent and crude right off the bat. Eager to see where it goes.

This is very well-written and I hope you continue with it. I really enjoyed the magic system and the characters are fun. Will definitely add to my Library!

I am very impressed. Well-written stories like this are hard to come by on this site. Darkly humorous but also haunting. The sex scene cracked me up!

Good job writing something so creepy & atmospheric

I am thoroughly enjoying the story so far. The premise is intriguing. I'm generally not a fan of large info dumps in the first chapter (i.e. most of Zeta's backstory could have been revealed over the course of her dialogue with Anlo). Then again, that's just my personal philosophy. Otherwise, good job

Love this so far! Interesting and darkly humorous concept

This is very good so far! One of the darkest I've read so far. I'm excited to keep on reading!

I like the story so far; it's morbid, surreal, but also very creative. Keep it up!

I like the premise so far. Will definitely check the rest out!

I am already impressed. It is well-written and has an interesting premise. Looks like it's gonna be a long one, though! :p