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i've very much enjoyed reading this first arc. I think your writing and storytelling are at a really good level. tbh i think i've enjoyed reading about xuanyuan allmost more than i have reading about fang yuan. I like that xuanyuan isn't as cold and detached from everything. And i also think having him be sure about his path this early on was a great decision. all in all i hope you'll continue to have fun writing this fic author, because i'll definitely have fun reading lol.
what do you mean no development? we got background on other characters and info about the abysasal child candidates etc. My guy you're reading a RI fanfic, 80% of the northern plains arc was filler with much less development than this chapter. And don't even get me started on after fang yuans zombie ascension.
so it really is 'fate' that beckons him
yog sothoth probably. "Yog sothoth knows the gate, Yog Sothoth is the gate. Past present and future are one in yog sothoth." the gate could be his ability to somehow transmigrate every time upon death and the past present and future would be his avatar ability. on top of that yog sothoth is commonly piczured as a mass of bubbles like pic rel. with this it would also make sense why the main body doesnt care about what mc does.
whoo wouldve thought yog sothoth to be so charismatic lol
same. i think it's good to have a change of pace in fanfiction. if i wanted to read about a cautious and unknowing mc i'd just reread lotm
ohhh that makes so much sense. "Yog sothoth knows the gate. Yog Sothoth is the gate. past present and future are one in yog sothoth."
return to thee
calling it now, he originally spawned in with 3 avatars: the main one, medicis brother, and one indescribably older that became a seq 0 at least
imagine if he pulled out a monocle and put it on. pallez wouldve died from a heart attack
as long as adam isn't a god yet he should only be able to sense someone saying his name out loud i think. Ankewelt is only a remnant at this point and asg is inside adam, so thinking should be pretty safe for the moment.
aw hell naw bro is living like a hundred years+ in the past 💀
reminds me of the guy who wrote the necronimicon in the lovecraft mythos, don't remember his name though.
tbh if we assume the bloodborne world was real, mc killed a being much more powerful and dangerous than a mere god, while his true body was at lvl0
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