BigBoyJenkins

Honestly for the free available chapters i find this to be a really good novel so far. There isn’t much more i could as for other than more chapters daily but if we are getting chapters of this quality then im all good with the author to continue at their current pace.

Hey author this paragraph could be fixed( not hate just wanna help out)

Hey author, few spelling grammar mistakes here that you might wanna fix

If only they knew that Awe doesn’t do things like factions.at least not until the end, where they are pointless. Maybe this will be different who know, but chances are the mc will keep jumping into risky situations and making stupidly strong enemies and constantly have to pick up after his friends get slaughtered, kidnapped or left behind

At of chapter 4( most chapter available right now) i will say im already heavily invested and hope the author starts and keeps this novel going. Already love the power system and how it works

Will do

Really tried to enjoy this book i did. But if the mc is talk no justued out of beating up his bullies and lets a system talk shit constantly when the system wouldn’t even fullfill its mission without him im good. You ever decided to rewrite this, take away the systems personality and get the mc to pay those who wronged him back

I haven’t started reading this yet but im a huge sucker for books like this, if you can get to about 50-100 chapters released you can take it slow and release 2-3 chapters a week, but if you can make it there then i dont see why it wouldnt do good

Thanks author,

Will do