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My lord writer, spoiler me, what are the effects of this skill? (I am afraid I didnt notice description somewhere, and I dont want to search 30 chapters to make sure)
I am currently at earlier chapters, noticed therr is not written from what anime or world his soul eater skill came from, anyone knows?
Evolution in po word may have gone different, but bears do not have aweat glands in ours. Only mammals like apes and horses have significal amout, bears and dogs dont have them at all.
And once again i forgot that webnovel does not allow to edit comments and my grammar mistakes are pernament
It was one of the best fanfics I read, you did great, you are not weak, its just that big franchises like marvel are hard. All that dietes, cosmic entities, timelines and their interactions with something from another multiverse like thomas powers is labirynth of knowledge, it does not take strenght or intelligence to navigate it, one needs years with reading comics and wiki to do so. Its not like younare not capabke of it, you are simply not ready for such ambitious project, You can still continue this fanfic as it is, just pull some trick that will peevent greater multiverse from interfering with thomas and universes he resides. You can give him more power too, he alredy has power of one of the fragments of brilliant light, lets say you give him power of monarch of transformation too for balnce between monarchs and rulers or something, then you could add shadow monarch if you want becouse his power is technically both, or you can say it is as it is your fanfic. I am not demanding anything, just giving ideas, maybe they will be usefull in your future fanfics.
Ol its in chapter 20, and to add something, i am not dossapoonted in dumbledore not being some evil manipulator like in some fnafics, but assuming that and learning occulmency before meeting him would be pretty realistic.
Hey man i am at the start of this book but I noticed that mc seems to forgit about okulmency, is this fixed in firther chapters ormi missed it?
The part in first chapter where mc states he would take any job except ones that include killing asians may push you away from the story. But I read it whole up to chapter 272, and it was the only show of nationalism in this entire novel, to the point that i belive it was mandatory to appear in order to make this novel legal in author country or something, becouse it literally never appears anymore. I literally forgot about it and didnt thought that author may be asian, till i read other revievs telling about it before writting my own. And its just asian, no specific country mentioned. Its not the best i ever read, but its smooth to read, dialogues are ok and the concept along with progress are interesting enought to get you throught. Its not 5 stars, but it does not have any big flaws to mention, from technical point of view its very solid 4 stars, maybe 4,5 . But considering that the author is asian, I give 5 stars, for writting effort, becouse if not for the no assian killing sentence that apears once in whole novel, I wouldnt notice it may be asian novel, and thats something very rare for asian novels, its 4 stars by my very strict standars, 5 for effort in writting it well enought to not notice its asian without that one sentence. I would belive its not asian and this sentence was a coinsidence if not for the fact that I do not belive in accidents. Mmm, it appears that the best compliment one can give to an asian author is that he writes soo well he does not seem to be asian.
*them, i curse you webnovel for not allowing to edit comments.
Oh I see you liked then all, hope they provided some help.