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harrypotter914 years agoRépondu à mugi19Just wanted to post one of my fav stories...I like reading stories more than writing.
- harrypotter914 years agoPosté
The concept of the story is interesting, very good. I think the written language can do with some improvements as I had to guess at some things in the story , maybe it is a cultural difference, in the way you say things which caused me confusion.
