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Larkspur3yrRépondu à OEmilioHello HR?
A letter arrived from the Minister of all Libraries in Gaia. I was tasked to retrieve a book that is supposedly important. No other librarians could do the bidding and since I "probably have a lot of time in my hands" according to the letter, I was summoned. I must retrieve it immediately and deliver it to them.- Larkspur3yrRépondu à OEmilioI cannot say that I completely believe the tale. If it is indeed true, I cannot change what my ancestors did to the Creator. I can only live and mind my own business.
- Larkspur3yrCommentéCh 8 Tragic Mouse
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True.
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You are so organized in your writing. :) The prelude set the world background and history. I could imagine what has been going on in the book's world. I highly suggest everyone to read the prelude first. You are really detailed and I am really glad to see how careful you are in writing. No grammar and spelling lapses. It felt like watching a movie. You are amazing. ^_^
- Larkspur3yrRépondu à Gideon_Johnson
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Don't start with me. I can already imagine my 2D crushes. lol.
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- Larkspur3yrCommentéCh 9 009 Light Of Luna
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I am light and light is me.
I lost myself in the battle. I was no longer Em fighting a dragon but instead I was light itself. Dazzling and flashing with brilliant speed. Cutting limbs and severing tendons. In a few moments the dragon was covered in deep horrid wounds all over. When a purple streak of Aura would fly over an area of it, seconds later blood would spurt out. Muscle being separated from tendon and bone. Limbs from its body. - Larkspur3yrCommenté
Author, how do you make up some kind of spell chant? Me jealous.
"Falling storms and crashing waves of perpetual destruction, your wrath never quelled, the wake of your presence sorrow filled. Halt thy ire to become my righteous shield and...." - Larkspur3yrCommenté"We only have one shot, if either of us mess up that is it! I will draw its attack and counter it, I need you to work on your strongest defensive spell and let me know when it's ready ok?"
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ooohhhh some action again.
Having charged the fire-bolt in my right hand for a while now I slammed it down on the ground between the dragon and us. The new found crater caused it to stumble with its balance having been attacked. With all the dirt and dust in the air we had temporary cover. I ran towards Ven and quickly gave her the next steps of my plan. - Larkspur3yrPosté
I thought this was gonna be "another weak female MC" but I'm glad I was wrong. I needed that fresh air. It's nice to see the characters grow in the first few chapters. I could imagine the scene completely due to the author's detailed descriptions specially for the main characters. I see that you crafted them with love. I am excited to see your progress. :)
- Larkspur3yrCommentéCh 7 Onyx eyes
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Ooooh that car
Meanwhile parked on the side of the road was a matte black Rolls Royce Ghost. Inside the luxury car sat Dean Davis, his onyx eyes were fixed on the beautiful girl who had just left the bank and strolled into the phone shop. His eyes followed her every movement as she then exited the shop and walked to the bus stop. - Larkspur3yrCommenté
I understand that.
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Thank you for being detailed with men XDDD
He walked straight past her, his manly cologne smell drifted into the air. Following after him were several men, whom she assumed to be bank staff and his personal secretary. Her mind became fuzzy, she knew him but she wasn't sure from where. - Larkspur3yrRépondu à HarpGrand
True
"The Dropbox was first opened eight years ago and you are the first to open it. Follow me."