Review Detail of Larkspur in The EOD [End of Days]

You are so organized in your writing. :) The prelude set the world background and history. I could imagine what has been going on in the book's world. I highly suggest everyone to read the prelude first. You are really detailed and I am really glad to see how careful you are in writing. No grammar and spelling lapses. It felt like watching a movie. You are amazing. ^_^