Zane_Haloski
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His stupidity was based off of a dense mc. Dense mc aren’t that dumb. It’s funny writing a stupid character. I would recommend.
Don’t get caught up in lies!
Someone needs to play Tarkov to truly understand “unforgiving”
Me having to re read it multiple times because it was written roughly. (No disrespect)
Thank you for the review. This is my first somewhat successful story. It is much easier to write a dumb character. I could make him smart but I think it is funny if a character is dumb and selfish. It makes people mad which some characters are not written to be like. Think of Subaru from Re:Zero. Thank you so much for your review.
noble sounds to formal in my opinion. don't know a better name though.
Are these world destroying great weapons?
You see us men Do things because of curves
The first skill pill was cheap because it was a first time discount. Kind of like a welcome bonus but you have to pay for it.
Sephker did that is how he got the bank skill
In this world books are very rare for a certain reason. You can obtain them with enough effort. What he was reading on was his status screen mixed with his skill. A system is what I was going for.
Thanks for the actual constructive criticism.