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Lola_Ben

Lola_Ben

Lv2

I am me. :)

2021-01-10 JointNigeria
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Répondu à Lola_Ben

    *story

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    I Will Never Leave You
    Sports, voyage et activités · Flaim
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Posté

    This tory is simple and endearing. I love how the female lead adores animals. Just some editing is needed. Good work, author

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    I Will Never Leave You
    Sports, voyage et activités · Flaim
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Répondu à Flaim

    Thank you so much for your review! 🤗

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    ZARAMANNI
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Commenté

    Thank you so much for your comment. I actually don't think that I'll be continuing the story on Webnovel anymore. I can only sign it non-exclusive and I don't like the non-exclusive system here. But.... If you would love to read more. This story is presently free to read on INKITT. It is complete as well. Well, just Book One is available for now. 🤗

    Ch 4 PART ONE: CHAPTER THREE
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    ZARAMANNI
    Fantaisie · Lola_Ben
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
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    The descriptions are lovely. I love how the story progresses showing everything that needs to be shown at that point. Keep the good work up, dear writer. 🤗

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    The Revenge & Success Story of an Orphaned Flower
    Urbain · Uner90
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Répondu à Olajide_O_Favour

    Thank you, Favour 🙃❤️

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    ZARAMANNI
    Fantaisie · Lola_Ben
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Répondu à authorsommy_

    Thank you! 🙃❤️

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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Posté

    I like the progressions of the story. With some more editing, this story would be amazing. Keep it up. :)

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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Commenté

    Seeing my name in a book is nice.

    Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.
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    Crumbled
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Posté

    A really lovely journey so far. I loved the imagery painted with words right from the beginning and I love the character interaction so far. Do keep updating . 🙃

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    Two lovers one throne : All to rule the alien world
    Fantaisie · nova_cheron2
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Répondu à Ink_Quanta

    Thank you

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    Fantaisie · Lola_Ben
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
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    The whole matrix thing is intriguing. But you need to work on heavily editing your story. Try to break long paragraphs into smaller ones. And look into your grammar as well, it needs strong polishing. Other than that, your storyline is interesting and I wish you the best. 🙃

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    Moved To The New link
    Politique et sciences sociales · Ink_Quanta
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Commenté

    Ohh... It's like a screenplay

    Ch 1 Genius In Prison
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    Moved To The New link
    Politique et sciences sociales · Ink_Quanta
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Répondu à Lola_Ben

    A little note for the author ... Please try as much as possible to watch out for punctuation and grammar errors. You can always do that later, but keep it in mind. 🙃❤️

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    A Touch Of Sunflower
    Urbain · authorsommy
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Posté

    This story is soooo cute. It is a fresh breath of air especially with the delightful friendship displayed in the story. Vienna and Leon's story is certainly going to be worth reading so I'll add this one to my library. 🙃❤️

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    A Touch Of Sunflower
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
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    that's what they say...

    "Whoa-whoa-whoa... whoa" she called tapping his shoulder as each word left her mouth. "I'm not drunk. I'm just... tipsy" she smiled.
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    A Touch Of Sunflower
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Commenté

    You had better not go ahead with posting my work. It won't be funny for you .

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Blackmailing His Runaway Bride
    Urbain · Daoist0mxXF6
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben1yr
    Commenté

    What motivation? This is the story I wrote and you are claiming it's your creation Did you even check Webnovel before stealing the work and posting it here? Search for BLACKMAILING HIS RUNAWAY BRIDE by LOLA BEN, okay?? What a grand thief.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Blackmailing His Runaway Bride
    Urbain · Daoist0mxXF6
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben2yr
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    The writing style in this book just makes the story flow so well, I couldn't help but wonder what would be happening next. The characters are built so well and descriptions are just amazing. This book is worth the read. ❤️

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    Anemones
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  • Lola_Ben
    Lola_Ben2yr
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    How do I put this... this story is one that just makes you smile no matter what. The teen vibe makes the story even more interesting. There are errors that need to be worked on, but nevertheless, the story is amazing to read. Keep it up Author ❤️

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    Just happened
    Urbain · Zenande
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