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The whole matrix thing is intriguing. But you need to work on heavily editing your story. Try to break long paragraphs into smaller ones. And look into your grammar as well, it needs strong polishing. Other than that, your storyline is interesting and I wish you the best. 🙃

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Thanks! Looking forward to that...