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thanks for the chapter! this is just me ranting you can ignore it.. While I like reading this novel, the thing I don't like is how the MC while being a guardian like figure for Harry doesn't help him develop himself.. even though the MC goes around and help everyone..while Harry and other are probably developing faster with the help of MC.. it still feels like the Harry in this FF is the same as OG Harry.. why let Harry still be oblivious about everything... why not let have Harry have a different mindset in terms of gaining knowledge, exploring and training..(although we see some glimps of not being as predjudice as in canon.. even with Ron we see glimps of character improvment) and of course it's still early in the novel.. I just want to know which direction this novel is heading.. what are you cooking author
no other uses, for the red star? he got wizard blood from red stars, couldn't he get other stuff, or other permanent skills/abillities?
and then you killed it
FYI: firstname is correct.. only lastname is only known as Potter.. so Greengrass lineage is not confirmed..
nah it's fine.. if you like it then you like it.. was just wondering..(I think it's just my OCD tendencies acting up in this sort of situations)😅
jp name -> Shigeru
if you're taking the japanese naming route for MC why not do the same for other characters? in this case professor Oak should be Dr. Yukinari Ohkido
Tsunade: why? Reader: you have to ask the author... 😒
I think he lost some braincells.. since it's known they call themselves shinigami.. then again he is right in some way.. ninja's can't...
what hapoend to the automatic update of the remainjng chapters? are they also gone?
cracked should be split/cut..