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Kieren_Allman

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2020-12-18 JointGlobal
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à Monsterb620

    As a continuation of Chopstiksman's point they also work with absolutely no oversight and the ministry can't shut them down because of the power/knowledge they have. The order of the phoenix film shows part of the department. This offer is basically like being offered a place in the illuminati. No one knows for certain what they can do, but every has guesses/conspiracy theories.

    Saul Croaker - Unspeakable - Has studied time magic.
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

    It's obvious you aren't going to stay consistent and it is also obvious you are too immature to logically defend your points without falling into insults. Your comment basically implies Russia's paranoia is justified because of the power of infantry.

    Then war broke out in Western Europe over resources and for the first time, the magical world decided to do away with the muggles. The war was first fought between Ukraine and Russia but it devolved into muggles vs wizards in the span of a few months. Harry personally partook in the war under a different identity.
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

    Why are you defending Russia? They have invaded Ukraine, it doesn't matter why, they are still in the wrong. If anything current events make the author's work more valid because it is semi-realistic.

    Then war broke out in Western Europe over resources and for the first time, the magical world decided to do away with the muggles. The war was first fought between Ukraine and Russia but it devolved into muggles vs wizards in the span of a few months. Harry personally partook in the war under a different identity.
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Posté

    Very good start. The MC is an asgardian prince which is done slightly different than usual to keep the idea fresh. The writing is good and so far the characters seem realistic. I hope the author continues and doesn't just drop it right before it gets interesting.

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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à MisterImmortal

    Nehru was the one who pushed Lord Mountbatten to make the borders like that. Civil war was inevitable because of the resentment between Hindus and Muslims as Jinnah demanded a partition and America put economic pressure on Britain to leave. Similar to the situation in Israel, the UN chose the partition due to American Zionism

    "Of course, they hate him because he's against the abysmal British Raj, while they love him because he's too mad in his non-violence thinking and even stops other armed rebellions. What a fool, freedom is never achieved by non-violence. If we had not fought the Revolutionary war, the United States would still have been under the British, begging for freedom." Hector tore the letter in two and threw it in the fireplace.
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à Daoist872079

    1931 Statute of Westminster made them independent, they stayed as part of the Commonwealth by choice, as did most other Dominions, except Ireland.

    "Of course, they hate him because he's against the abysmal British Raj, while they love him because he's too mad in his non-violence thinking and even stops other armed rebellions. What a fool, freedom is never achieved by non-violence. If we had not fought the Revolutionary war, the United States would still have been under the British, begging for freedom." Hector tore the letter in two and threw it in the fireplace.
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à MisterImmortal

    He committed suicide with a poison apple because the drugs they gave him stopped him from pursuing his dream of improving his computing machine after the war.

    "His name is Alan Turing, he's probably in Bletchley Park, United Kingdom. Oh, if he's employed by the British Government then leave him be, poor man will end up in my hands anyway. One more thing, get Moony a bed." He ordered.
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Commenté

    *before yesterday

    "I hope all good things," said Quinn, noticing the man's French accent. "I can't say the same about you, though. Lia hasn't talked about you at all. Before tomorrow, I didn't even know you existed."
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à ghustV

    The author trying to world build is fine, but they've spent way too much time on this conversation. The pay off of the 'Hero' being a Lannister was predictable, and the reason for Ned to fear/be wary of the citadel is convoluted and overly complex considering a simple "they hide innovations which could aid the North and plan to destroy the First Men as they are an Andal group" would be simpler and more realistic.

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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Commenté

    There aren't any buffalo in the UK especially not the Yorkshire Moors, though buffalo are going to be reintroduced to Kent in 2022.

    He turned himself available invisible and went off. He flew above a distance above the tree, eighty feet above the ground, looking at the scenery as it zoomed past him — the hills, cows, buffalos, sheep, their shepherds, rock mounds, among other things suitable in the moor. Quinn entered the countryside with houses and small communities and flew over people living their lives, leaving behind only a gust of wind on the ground.
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
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    The story is very good so far. The author is laying a foundation for the future at a good pace, however, the lack of frequent updates really hamper continued interest.

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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Commenté

    *King-beyond-the-wall

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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
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    *Old Town, while it is a city its name is Old Town. Just a small nitpick, loving this so far though.

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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
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    *weirwood tree

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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
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    I will also do the twenty rounds for speaking without permission, Sir." Said Gellert with a look more determined than ever.
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à Brezer

    Did you read the paragraph. He isn't going to change it, he literally says it has already happened,so Tywin is seen as ruthless already.

    It's surprising to be reborn in the Lannister house, I was apprehensive as first after all the event that started everything and cause the war between the 5 Kings is after all because of Cersei and her bastard Joffrey. However, as I lay in the arms of the woman whom is now my mother I felt safe. I still remember my parents from my past life and I know that I can't love my new parents the same as I did with my old ones but I still love them to a degree after all I am sheltered and given the best care that money could buy in this time period. I also notice that I was born in the year 264 AC same date as the Stannis the Mannis birth date, that means Tywin is still Hand of The King for King Aerys the would be Mad King and I am pretty sure that 2 years from now the twin Jaime and Cersei will be born. I still got time to try and change some things so that when the time the series start there would not be too much casualty. With the Reyne-Tarbeck revolt has been dealt with before I was born I can say that my father already have the infamy of being a ruthless and cunning lord.
    The Young Lannister (Game Of Thrones Fanfic)
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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à La_Monserga

    Great to see, can't wait for ch. 26 and how he uses his knowledge of the Maester Plot when he's in Oldtown

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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Répondu à Kieren_Allman

    Monserga if I were you I would add 'Got' or 'Game of thrones' to the title so it is easier to search for now the 'Game of thrones' tag is gone. Would probably enable more people to see your work.

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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
    Posté

    Brilliant story. Reading it on Fanfiction as well, but I'm so glad it's been added to Webnovel. Jon Snow feels realistic, even for a gamer fic, and his reactions are both fitting to his character and unique from his over honourable TV self. The other characters are also well done and have great interactions with the protagonist.

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  • Kieren_Allman
    Kieren_Allman2yr
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    She is a bad person. She's Cersei but unlike Cersei -who at least has some cunning and intelligence- Catelyn's only positive trait is her care for her biological children

    "Trust me father...it's a lost cause...Lady Catelyn, she already detests me. I must strike while the iron is hot. At least I could direct that hatred towards myself instead of that poor child...I don't think she's a bad person...but she's certainly prejudiced." I replied to my father trying to justify my actions.
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