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Cause author doesnt know any other way to get his point across than by making mobs speak baseless rumors.
Why is the higest class called E not EX or something. Its so confusing.
Bruh didnt you have this same thing happen before. You only have urself to blame. Is it really so difficult to use word or notepad?
Author really tried to sell the idea that attaking one point in the aperture walls is some kind of obscure breakthrough technique. Bro cmon. If the clan really was trying to delay rank 2 breakthrough they would just reduce the amount of primeval stones given out.
No, this is the difference between those with and without talent.
Your writing style is great just a shame the gold fingers you create break the lore. It happened in the RI fic and its the same case here. Arguably the most pivotal aspect of danmachi is the symbiosis between mortals and gods and you giving the mc a system just threw that all to the wind. The interactions, characters, scheming thats lost cause the mc doesnt need to join a familia is a far greater loss than the gains of the mc being evil.
Didnt mc say the magic warrior would achieve great feats later on in the story? Why is she is going to die so soon if he doesnt intefere?