Doing everything with your hands in your pocket is so cliché, it makes me feel embarrassed.... Enid please, it's ok if they break up in 1 or two years for whatever reason and then he gets Wednesday.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I smell GPT Chat

I believe that there was a lack of greater depth in the transmigration situation, the fact that billions of humans were suddenly forced to fight each other was not well addressed, families were not separated into the two groups? Will they kill each other regardless? The act of killing what was a human was simply ignored, as if everyone forgot that they were once human and simply became creatures of mind and body. It would be better to simply transmigrate the MC to a fantasy world with the same plot, it would make more sense.

Thanks for the chapter!

Great chapter! Thanks!

Do this as an experiment, I really didn't want to demotivate you, it's just that using GPT Chat is really ruining this platform. Good Lucky.

O hate chat gpt

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Good stories with good plots are being ruined by Chat GPT's monotonous and boring writing, I can already identify the use of AI from afar, simply writing that goes in circles, 10 paragraphs to say one thing.

I've made it this far and I can say it's a great story, despite the personality deviations to fit into the plot, I don't think Ross's personality would make him say and do these things. But I must say that you should try to use Chat GPT less, or stop altogether, it is terrible. Chat GPT's writing makes you sleepy and angry, it takes 10 paragraphs to say one thing, every sentence goes in circles, the fights are poorly narrated, several events are clearly deleted, for example, the moment when Agana ripped out half of Ross's heart , this was extremely poorly narrated, it seems that in the middle of the fight several stages were deleted. You're a good writer, and your story has potential, but Chat GPT is putting everything at risk. That's my opinion, thanks for the chapter.

This is a fanfic that I would like to marathon 100 chapters in a row!

CDC is a perfect and self-sustainable base, you just need to bring gasoline for the generators, it shouldn't be difficult to get that.

unreadable.

ctrl c + v from mtl, without any editing

Whenever I start a new fanfic I look for some information on the first chapter, timeline, whether the MC knows the plot, the MC's abilities and love interest. For me, this information has to be given quickly in a fanfic.

Everything was going well, it was interesting, then suddenly at the end of chapter one the story did a 180° and I don't know where it went, I still don't understand what's happening or who Joffrey is, I don't know if I'm lost or If the story really got ruined, I'll leave it to reread later...

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter