TERENO26

The dialogue is good but the thing is, the author copy paste the dialogue from The Walking Dead. It what was Negan, one of the antagonist, said before bashing open the head of a main character.

Geez, it's cringe haha!

I know the reference

So... how did you know?

And now as a man?

Because I'm rewriting

Every chapter come with a purpose and I don't like meaningless division. I should have uploaded after finishing with the writing but, this chapter was just too long.

Haha, yes.

Yeah sorry for the late update. Check out the little project I had been working on lately, HxH: Six Paths of Nen

I'm rewriting this with a better narrative in mind. Of course, I am also improving the Grammar and wording. As for the changes... well the region 'Oplea' is already an instance. However the rewrite of the previously uploaded chapters will follow the same plot so... yeah the Starter is still a Buneary.