These chapters are incomplete! Totally missing a huge part of the story because it cuts off. I have really enjoyed the story line and have looked past all the horrible grammar and spelling issues because I enjoy the storyline so much. I am about ready to stop reading this though because its very frustrating to read the partial chapters and jump around and it feels like the story is just falling apart.

There’s a lot missing from the last few chapters... really confused. Titled “first quarrel”, but there was no quarrel and it certainly wouldn’t have been the first. And she told him she was pregnant but there was nothing about that! And this port city? Who are they meeting? Very short, incomplete chapters... you seriously need a new edItor as well.