Well everyone has their tastes, personally it made me want to vomit. Not the story. I'm talking about the MC. ....,.........................

The eyes of everyone who likes an overpowered MC looking at the apology:

Orochimaru get out of that body!

We all know Slendon would die from the smell alone, he can't stand dirt Imagine yourself in a zombie apocalypse hahaha

The Chinese really love the phrase Heaven and Earth.

It's good, but too many 'Y's in each paragraph.

Okay, it shows that you have no experience in this type of plot. Honestly writing these types of stories is more difficult What to write others, I like the idea of ​​changing Snape's destiny You could have created a different simulation, giving it a better destination Even if it is a lie, people will never know, they will think that this is the future Spice up the story

this is boring.............................................................................................................................................................

This guy wouldn't be stupid enough to let them create a Doomsday TRUE?

Po is going to use it as a cover, in the most literal way possible hahaha

Okay, but man, is it just me or did someone else have a hard time? Read those cheesy moments A few are fine but friend There are more moments like this than reactions to the history

Well it could be worse at least you can pass the time I got excited when I read fast and furious, does anyone know if there is Any good works from this movie saga? It would be greatly appreciated.

It is the truth and even more so if its objective is to change everything bad that will happen. You have offended all the reincarnated with this blasphemy *Looks at him indignantly and leaves* xd

So that Kakashi wasn't too Op he had to be Nerfed

I was expecting some otherworldly Op ability, like reincarnated. Pity.

As I understand it, this empire fell in the year 1646.

This is starting to feel more like a summary or is it just me?

Ok, I'm going to stop here this just got too weird all of a sudden. Honestly this guy seems more Lucifer than the same Lucifer from the TV series Which is ironic since he is a reincarnated human. There is no doubt that the sickest are humans.

Why is there nothing to explain, or Do you need someone to explain to you how to sleep or drink water? It's something anyone can see just by reading..

That depends entirely on the skill of each author. Out of every 100, there are 10 good ones. So you understand why people get bored. But a plot argument has nothing to do with making a story boring.