Enyru

Its golden

mistake

hair is now bit shorter

sorry, english please🙏

he did not even use a percent of his power, like he was holding back by alot

read the synopsis, i talked about this

Thank you for your feedback, and I appreciate your honesty. I apologize if the writing style came across as overly poetic and exaggerated. I completely understand your perspective and will take your suggestion to heart. I'll work on toning down the poetic elements and aiming for a more balanced and natural writing style that aligns better with the story. Your input is valuable in helping me refine the narrative, and I hope the adjustments will make for a more enjoyable reading experience.

Yes it happens after the character development