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Saint_Rey1yrCommentéso a book is some kind of system? welp
As she slowly opened it up, a memory from her past came flooding back. It was a distant memory of an unknown man reading to her from a book just like this one. She couldn't remember who the man was or what the book was about, but she remembered how it felt to be in his arms, listening to his soothing voice.- Saint_Rey1yrCommenté
why is she so sassy ahaha
"Off-limits? That's ridiculous. I don't see any harm in being in this room," Mingya said, trying to imitate Charlotte's tone as much as she could. - Saint_Rey1yrPosté
I like the current state of the story so far, hope to see more updates and see further development it is a great find by the way, and also it seems like you are quiet a kin to fantasy XX well the current phase is a little slow, but yea Im still on the first 5 chapter, will right again a review after awhile
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I will give the Writing quality at 3 - the story is new and still ongoing so I can't state yet for the writing quality, same goes for the Stability of updates, and Story development Character design and world backrgound might need a little push in their description, also looking forward for the world building. so far so good!!
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Truck kun hit again
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Saint_Rey2yrCommentéCh 1 Chapter 6:New Friend