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Too tragic but you mentioned tag as comedy and please put anti hero tag for Mc
Sorry to say but I don’t think Mcnus is a good person it would have been good if you mentioned him as anti-hero Mc
Mc is business tycoon before transmigration and he didn’t patent his invention automobile so laughable does author don’t have full grasp on story and clarity did author use ai
Why it looks more like an Ai these novels very much on same template always positive mood and unrealistic plot like every one is happy and all are very optimistic like that atleast there should be some realism
Please change the plot Mc is more like a coward as if he is the cowardly person in our world and I feel he has very much less iq all we readers want is rational Mc not sometimes cowards sometimes kind and funny Mc please change the plot and rewrite it
Use Mc’s knowledge change the plot
Hey author you spoiled the plot making Mc inferior to iron atleast you should asked evolving iq or non stop iq increase atleast in second wish and third wish you should have asked hyper adaptation
Can’t even change slightly of the orginal plot by atleast preventing shooting that persons arm is this fanfiction or just stuffing a character into original and same plot as orginal and replacing main character
You have wasted the terror infinity potential weak mc - ( weak character design)
Add anti hero and dark tag if possible so that it won’t look like bait