b3_rt

sorry... I'm not in a plan for joinning competition. really² bussy 😂

i've read it all and it's amazing even just 2k words it already tell a really long and good story i really² like it. good job and keep writing 😄

well i read few first chapter and it's really-really amazing. It's definietly better than what i've wrote and the title is catchy too. good work

you mean like the first person view?

thank you for the review

i really like the way you write it and describe everything in detail so that the reader like me can really get the emotion and make us think that we are somehow inside the novel. Good job :D

wow it's really detail and i get the emotion in it you do a really great job

try to read the next part i know it's kinda suck at the first or second part ( i wrote that around 2 years ago and that's the first time i tried to write sorry for the inconvinient). try to read the other parts it's getting better and better

And sorry but i write it generally first because i don't want the other people that doesn't know about the WW2 history to get confused. I'm planning to make it more detail later in other chapters

sorry i'll try to put even more detail things. And if you can help which part to improve it's even better. thx for the comment you already helped me 🙂